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virtual accolades

lisa's moment III

a few weeks ago john and i had the opportunity of participating in Maya Stein's last poetry workshop on her Tour de Word.  it was a powerful night and lit something in both of us to get back to our writing, to nurture these voices within.  i was moved by everyone's efforts that night and was grateful to have such an intimate night with friends.  listening to john read the poems he created from maya's prompts reminded me of one of the first things that attracted me to him: he has a way with the written word that pulls me in each time.

i wrote several pieces that night and after the proddings of one friend have decided to share one here, be kind:

 

virtual accolades

speaking of another

i see a glint of knowing...and mischief in her eyes

compliment received with

i can't believe you could capture if for me to see,  it's undeniable


women of passion encircle one another

buoys from dangerous pools of thought

 

after a river of buttons clattering i click

send

post

publish

 

while messages transmit in seconds

our lives are seperate and removed

by mountains

valleys

great bodies of water

 

our hearts remain entwined

shared laughter reduced to LOL

 

this web may have its holes and faults

but something great has been woven here

 

Reader Comments (7)

oh i so love this jenica. just what i need in light of all my confusion with the 'do i or dont i' with fb and blogging. thank you.

11.22.2010 | Unregistered Commenterlatisha

Love this!

11.22.2010 | Unregistered CommenterWendy

It's beautiful Jenica. Thank you so much for sharing it. Miss you. xox

11.22.2010 | Unregistered CommenterSteph

Well done you! I'm so happy you hit publish!

Love you. Love. You.

11.22.2010 | Unregistered CommenterJolie

love it love it love it-- and how much do I love that you and John did this class together-- beautiful

11.24.2010 | Unregistered Commenterelizabeth

ohhhh. perfection.

11.25.2010 | Unregistered CommenterAmy

oohhhhhh. this is so incredibly beautiful. love.

11.25.2010 | Unregistered Commenterdarlene

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